GardnerN VisualPoem from Kapaa Middle School MEDIA on Vimeo.
My special effect made It look good but I needed more of It. I also added sound and made a big improvement with the words and pictures. My voice wasnt as clear as it could be so i did mess up a little. The mood is good showing of nature showing us what it does and what it can do, i find it really creative! Everything had a cause and effect moment, this proves I can do a fine job In a hard set up.
I am satisfied that I could actually do this amazing oppurtunity for us to compete In! We have all made one and thay are all so good! But there has to a winner... I dont think it was mine though. This person had this experience before and i didn"t so I did have trouble with the wright material. This had been the most simplest movie project we had so far In GT, and sense Its by yourself, It Is also hard.
Great visuals in your poem.
ReplyDeleteYou were mumbling your poem the entire time it was hard to understand.
Great usage of sound effects.
Compliment: Good Lyrics
ReplyDeleteCriticism: Need a lot more applicable video B-roll
Compliment: Good sound effects
I like how there were a lot of picture visuals
ReplyDeleteYour voice was a little too soft, i couldn't hear half your poem
Cool sound effects
great pictures
ReplyDeleteread your clearly
good effects
Compliment:The b-roll had unique camera angles
ReplyDeleteArea of Improvement:The sound effect kinda blotted out some stuff
Compliment:The poem was awesome
Nice shots
ReplyDeleteSome pictures were blurry and the audio was not clear
good job
I liked how the b-roll matched the audio
ReplyDeleteToo many pictures, too little video.
The words recited in the poem were nice.
I like the begining wood shot
ReplyDeleteThe b-roll was late and the pictures are low quality
I like the amount of pictures you have.
good b roll make your voice louder good effects
ReplyDeleteI like the words you used in the poem.
ReplyDeleteI think that the pictures should have the ken burns effect and the woosh sound was off and loud.
Your shots matched what you said good job!
nice pictures
ReplyDeleteyou could talk more clearly and some pictures are blurry
good job
I liked your use of sound effects! Your words were slurred so I couldnt hear your poem! I liked the b-roll that you got ah!
ReplyDeleteCompliment: I like your poem.
ReplyDeleteCriticism: I think you should've got more creative B-Roll or not as stretched your pictures as much.
Compliment: The visuals were good.
Compliment: I like your poem.
ReplyDeleteCriticism: I thin your audio could've been a little louder and you could have talked a little more clear.
Compliment: I liked how your visuals matched what the poem was saying.
good poem, effects and transitions needed, some good pictures
ReplyDeletegood b-roll
ReplyDeletecould of focus some of the pictures
nice voice over
Cool theme
ReplyDeleteVoice over was a little un clear and soft.Visuals were very pixelated and stretched.Also some shot were dark.
Very creative shots
Has good audio and added noises
ReplyDeleteSome pictures has bad quality and dark
B-roll of plants are good and clear
I like how you had the "wooosh" sound effect.
ReplyDeleteSome of you images were pixelated and the audio was really soft.
I liked the B-Roll you included
Good Audio.
ReplyDeleteYou should've used videos not pictures.
Good Shots.
I like the different b-roll.
ReplyDeleteThe wosh sound was loud you might want to turn that volume down.
I like how your audio was leveled.
Love the idea of your poem. Could have spoke more clearly so we could understand. Great visuals.
ReplyDeleteYour shots were really nice! You were mumbling and I couldn't really understand what you were saying. Your special effects were really nice!
ReplyDeleteI really like your b-roll.
ReplyDeleteI think one thing that could be better is your audio.
I also like your topic.